Updated Plot

I have decided to upload an updated version of my plot because I have since changed some aspects of it since I have uploaded my Storyboard and the Treatment Sheet.


Changes made

Title: Originally called 'The Stukeley's ~ Changed to 'Drummer Street


Genre: Soap Opera, Teen Drama

Characters: Originally they didn't have names because I thought I wouldn't be able to remember them, but for the sake of others I'm giving everyone names.

Victim: Robyn
Victim's Friend: Chandler
Bully: Bianca
Victim's Boyfriend: Jack
Victim's Brother: TJ
Victim's Sister: Raven

Plot:

[Original] Show begins with the friend of the victim (Chandler) having flash backs of the party where her friend (Robyn)died, the memories are good however.

[Changed] In the storyboard I removed it but I've decided to place it back into the story as it gives some background information and it acts as a reminder of last weeks episode.

[Original] Chandler confronts Bianca, thinking that she threatened Robyn, which then lead to Robyn committing suicide.
[Changed] Chandler confronts Bianca, firstly thinking that Bianca had poisoned Robyn after seeing them arguing at the party. However, Bianca denies this and implies she killed herself, the friend then implies that she could've commit suicide because of the bullying.

[Original] Bianca shifts the blame onto the victims boyfriend,(Jack) and claims that he was abusive and he's therefore the reason why she would've killed herself.
[Changed] Bianca shifts the blame onto Jack, who the audience then learn is Chandler's brother. Chandler then gets defensive and states that Jack was the perfect boyfriend to her friend and is very confused why Bianca would even imply that he's the reason. Bianca, also confused by Chandler's naïve reaction then questions her on whether she knows a certain bit of information about her Jack. This ends open and leaves an enigma hanging around for a moment in the show while the audience guess what Jacks involvement in Robyn's death was.

[Original] Jack then confronts the victims dad, and implies that he killed her since he wanted his daughter gone because of the shame she brought to the family and a suicide would bring sympathy to his campaign. 
[Changed] The victims parents ask Jack to come over to discuss his involvement in the daughters death (they basically are setting him up to confess), Jack however is angered by the suggestion and then has a row with the parents till a phone call interrupts them.
[Changed Again] The victim's brother (TJ) invites Jack to discuss his involvement in his sisters death and tries to get to the bottom of the case before the police gives their reports. The two discuss this in a pub where TJ's friends are in the background, leaving Jack outnumbered and ultimately intimidated.

[Original] The father then reveals that Robyn had died from ecstasy and then accuses Jack for being a bad influence and being the one to give them too Robyn. 
[Changed] Their argument is interrupted by a phone call from the police. The mother answers and finds out that Robyn had died from taking drugs, this then causes the dad to once again put the blame on the boyfriend and they then argue again.
[Changed Again] TJ states that he heard from a source that Jack gave Robyn drugs, this causes Jack to stumble because it's true. The police then call TJ and confirm that Robyn died because of ecstasy. This shocks Jack because he states that he never gave Robyn ecstasy, therefore it had to be someone else.

[Original] A massive brawl breaks out between Jack and the father, the mother screams for the sister of the victim (Raven) to call the police. Scene ends with Raven rushing to call the police, she states what's happening then there's a close up shot and she reveals with an out pouring of emotions that she was the one to give Robyn drugs for the party. While this goes on we see flashbacks of the events where Robyn takes the drugs and then it ends with Raven crying.
[Changed] The camera turns to the sister being secluded and away from the arguments taking place, we then zoom into her face and see flashbacks from her point of view and find out that se got the drugs from a drug dealer who also confirms that the dosage would be enough to kill Robyn. We then see Raven give the drugs to Robyn, who then later on in the night collapses and we see Raven stand over Robyn as her eyes begin to shut.